Well, first of all, when I put in "Circulatory System" in the citizendium
search box, I was promptly directed to a minor psychedelic band circa 2000
rather than the "organ system". That needs celine purses to be
fixed as there will be many links to the organ system, but fewer to the band,
and there has to be some kind of better directing sign than whether the "s" of
System is capitalized.
Once I clicked "organ system" I was sent to an article that had to do with
biology, but not much else in the way of the blood, heart, etc. The way that the
"organ system" circulatory system wikipedia article is laid out is not wrong,
but it is not useful. It is not actually about the organ system. It takes the
stance that the article is about the whole gestalt of circulatory systems, that
there http://www.celinehandbagse.com/ are organisms that have
systems that circluate substances and those that don't, and that these systems
can therefore be open, closed, or nonexistant. And goes on from there, never
really reaching the "heart" of the matter (pun intended).
Although the circulation of substances within an organism (or corporation )
is an important concept, it is more important to have an article with celine handbag the
title "Circulatory System" that discusses the vertebrate circulatory system with
the human system featured, as this ties in to so many articles on medical topics
as well as biology. For example, a reader should be able to go from blood to
bone marrow to heart to hypertension to circulatory system and keep things
reasonably in context, without being suddenly confronted by music makers or
jellyfish. On the other hand, the band and the invertebrate systems do deserve a
place. Nancy Sculerati MD 14:21, 29 December 2006 (CST)
I removed several paragraphs about the open Celine and closed
systems. Some wikilinks were removed in the process.
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